Kamis, 29 November 2012

EXAMPLE OF DESCRIPTION TEXT


 Kelimutu National Park


Kelimutu National Park is Located in Ende Regency, on Flores Island-East Nusa Tenggara Province. This Uniqueness of this park consists in the three Couldron-Shaped lakes, each of which is a different colour : blue, green and brown. The colours change from time to time.

Kelimutu National Park can be reached from almost every regional capital in Flores by way of 4 wheel drives vehicles.Visitors from the westcan take the route via Ende and then continue on to Moni which is at a distance of 53 km. From the east they can pass though Maumere and then continue on to Moni which is at distance of 95 KM. From Moni can be reached by treck to Kelimutu ( 13 km )

Lake Kelimutu which is located in top of the mountain this Kelimutu enter in network of National Park Kelimutu. This Lake reside in the height 1.631 metre from sea level.

Some flora which can be met around lake for example Kesambi ( Schleichera Oleosa), Fir-Tree ( Casuarina Equisetifolia) and endless flower [of] Edelweiss. While fauna [of] exist in about lake, for example Deer ( Cervus Timorensis), Forest Pig ( Sus Sp.), Partridge ( Gallus Gallus) and Hawk.

COMMENTARY TEXT

A commentary text is not a summary of an issue. This text consists of 90 % from the writer’s idea or opinion.

A commentary text structure consists of three (3) components. They are:

1. Title
2. General Statement
3. Stepped explanation

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TV Films Must Be Censored

There are too many movies on TV featuring vulgarity, violence, superstition and indecency. Scenes depicting violence may inspire high school students to do likewise in a brawl, for example.
Films selected for broadcast should inspire viewers to be persistent in their struggle for better life, and should not feature mentally disturbed people. They should present the beauty of Indonesia and the diversity of its traditional culture. Most importantly, TV films should have plausible plots.

Given the above explanation, it is necessary to subject all TV movies to tight censorship as otherwise these films will only create a permissive and violent society.


Read also a commentary text below!
Title: : Cheating with Mobile PhonesGeneral statement:
As police expand their investigation into cheating in the state run college entrance exam by using mobile phones, people deplore the low morality among the growing generation and many also condemn the absurdity of the current education system that drove student to do such a thing. Strong blame should also be laid on local authorities who failed to prevent such a misdeed, long anticipated in the overdeveloping information technology environment of this country.

Explanation:
About 100 students in Gwangju have been "confirmed" as having been involved in the cheating, some transmitting the answer, some receiving them, others coordinating the illicit communications outside testing places.

It is unfortunate that dishonest means were used by students who wanted to get a higher score in the state test and enter a college that is beyond their academic ability.
But what dismay us are that such scandals as this and other scandals will continue to take place around us until and unless the nation is freed from its obsession with college diplomas.

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Filthy Terminal
Arjosari bus station is very poor condition. Street vendors are found virtually everywhere in this terminal. The restaurant inside the bus station carelessly tosses out its dirty water as it pleases. The garbage is everywhere. The whole place stinks. The whole station is the very picture of filth
As every public transportation, vehicle that enters this station has to pay a fee, there is, in fact, a source of money to pay people to keep the terminal clean.

Sabtu, 17 November 2012

EngLish in the cLass



English is an international language which is very useful in this globalization era. Therefore, many people want to study English. In here, I will explain some basic knowledge of English skill.

GREETINGS

1.      FORMAL
Saying Hello                                                                          Possible Response
Hello, Morning, Good Morning, Hi                                        I’m very well, thank you.
How are you?                                                                          I’m not really well
How are you doing?                                                               I’m feeling really ill.
How’s life?                                                                             I have headache.
How is your……..?                                                                 So far so good.
How are you getting on?
Is a beautiful day, isn’t it?                                                      Yes. It is.
What a day?                                                                            Yes, it is sunny and windy.
It was raining early this morning.                                           Yes, I had. My weekend was great.
Did you have a good weekend?                                             You too.
How was your weekend?
Nice to see you again.
Saying Goodbye
See you later                                                                           See you.
Bye, take care                                                                         Keep in touch.
Goodbye                                                                                 Good night
See you soon                                                                           Sweet dream.

2.      INFORMAL
What’s up.
Long time no see.
Example dialogue of  GREETINGS AND INTRODUCTION

Glend  Paulus              : Hi, my name is Glend Paulus. You can call me Glend.
Chokky Shitohang      : I’am Chokky Shitohang. My nickname is Chokky. Nice to meet you Glend.
Glend Paulus               : Nice to meet you too. Where are you from, Chokky?
Choky Shitohang        : I’m from Surabaya. And you?
Glend Paulus               : I’m from Malang. What’s your education department?
Choky Shitohang        : English education . Are you English too?
Glend Paulus               : No, I’m not. Im  in history education department. Well, I must go now.    See you soon.
Choky Shitohang        : See you.


Asking for something            Asking about words              Asking to repeat
Can I have a pen,
please?                                     What’s  “(the world)” in        Could/ Can you repeat that, please?
                                                English?
Do you have a pen                  What does “(the world)”        Could/ Can you say that again,
for me?                                    mean?                                      please?
May I have a pen,                                                                   Pardon me?
please?                                                                                     Can/ Could you mention the last                                                                                                        sword?
My I wash my hand, sir?



Apologizing                            Asking for help                      Saying Hello and Goodbye
                                                                                                Good morning/ afternoon/ evening!
Excuse me, please.                  I don’t understand.                 Hello/ Hi
I;m sorry.                                 Can you help me,                    How are you?
                                                please?
Sorry about that.                     Is this right/ wrong?                Goodbye
Sorry I’m late.                         I’m sorry sir. You’re               Have a good weekend/  day /
                                                too fast.                                   evening/ time!